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Nice touches throughout here, both in art and writing. Great use of zipatone in panel 2. Classical exposition in panel 3 to bring folks up to speed on the current scenario. Nice plot twist in panel 4.

The only challenge here for me was the location in panel 1. A hillside. It seems a bit loopy to me, seeing as how Nicole’s dad tracked them using technology so it might reflect a little better on the story to have it located in a computer facility or by some means of showing the technical superiority of the antagonists here. I understand good ol’ dad is ruminating on his deception and all the implications therein, it just seems a bit loose to me. You generally work tighter.

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